The useful starting point
A sentence such as the test passed may omit the version, task and conditions that define the result. Without those details, readers can infer a wider success than the evidence supports. The missing context may be more important than another stylistic edit.
A small step to try
Review the claims in the draft and ask what was actually checked. Add the relevant scope, date and unresolved limitation. Link a record if the detail would otherwise overwhelm the message. Do not invent an owner or test result to fill a gap. A concise statement is useful when it preserves the boundaries of the information it conveys.